- reword the docs a bit
- PR is done, fixes #236
diff --git a/doc/build/changelog.rst b/doc/build/changelog.rst
index 9c321bb..e2717cf 100644
--- a/doc/build/changelog.rst
+++ b/doc/build/changelog.rst
@@ -12,11 +12,16 @@
         :tags: feature
         :tickets: 236
 
-      Added STOP_RENDERING keyword for returning/exiting from a
-      template early. Previously the docs suggested a bare
+      Added ``STOP_RENDERING`` keyword for returning/exiting from a
+      template early, which is a synonym for an empty string ``""``.
+      Previously, the docs suggested a bare
       ``return``, but this could cause ``None`` to appear in the
       rendered template result.
 
+      .. seealso::
+
+        :ref:`syntax_exiting_early`
+
 .. changelog::
     :version: 1.0.1
     :released: Thu Jan 22 2015
diff --git a/doc/build/syntax.rst b/doc/build/syntax.rst
index 7ec68cb..e3dd7db 100644
--- a/doc/build/syntax.rst
+++ b/doc/build/syntax.rst
@@ -212,7 +212,7 @@
     %>
 
 Any number of ``<%! %>`` blocks can be declared anywhere in a
-template; they will be rendered in the resulting module 
+template; they will be rendered in the resulting module
 in a single contiguous block above all render callables,
 in the order in which they appear in the source template.
 
@@ -443,13 +443,19 @@
         <%def name="x()">${x}</%def>
     </%text>
 
+.. _syntax_exiting_early:
+
 Exiting Early from a Template
 =============================
 
 Sometimes you want to stop processing a template or ``<%def>``
 method in the middle and just use the text you've accumulated so
-far. You can ``return`` the ``STOP_RENDERING`` value inside a Python
-block to exit the current rendering process.
+far.  This is accomplished by using ``return`` statement inside
+a Python block.   It's a good idea for the ``return`` statement
+to return an empty string, which prevents the Python default return
+value of ``None`` from being rendered by the template.  This
+return value is for semantic purposes provided in templates via
+the ``STOP_RENDERING`` symbol:
 
 .. sourcecode:: mako
 
@@ -467,12 +473,14 @@
             return STOP_RENDERING
     %>
 
-In older versions, return an empty string instead to avoid having
-``None`` in your rendered template:
+In older versions of Mako, an empty string can be substituted for
+the ``STOP_RENDERING`` symbol:
 
 .. sourcecode:: mako
 
     <% return '' %>
 
-.. versionadded:: 1.0.2
+.. versionadded:: 1.0.2 - added the ``STOP_RENDERING`` symbol which serves
+   as a semantic identifier for the empty string ``""`` used by a
+   Python ``return`` statement.